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Batman Fic - A Touch of the Dramatic
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Batman Fic
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jmie From: jmie Date: September 19th, 2008 08:36 am (UTC) (Link)
Yes, people willing to keep the fandom alive!

I really, really liked this piece. I like the way that Bruce was done, not some push-over and with reason to be skeptical; I like that he wasn't sugarcoated and just because a lot of the focus for this chapter was on Jonathan, he wasn't favored.

I absolutely love the subtle implications Bruce made, lips red like sucking on a lollipop, riiight, a lollipop made that shade. Ha, I guess that's the point. That was my favorite part.

I like how damn useful Alfred is! And smart.

And I just like this piece in general; I'm looking forward to more. ;) (please?)

indochinee From: indochinee Date: September 19th, 2008 11:27 am (UTC) (Link)
Thanks so much for the comment. :D

Fanfics that are shifted completely onto Bruce are good if they're done well. I find a lot of them, when they focus on Bruce, lose sight of Jonathan and then it's like he was never even there from the start. Haha.

Yes...Jonathan would love to have you believe he likes those lollipops. ;D

Alfred? Is awesome. There, I said it. He's resourceful, brilliant and hilarious. I love this guy. :D

Annnd, look forward to more in about a day or so? I'm nearly about half way done the next installment. :D
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